We had a critique this week for our first and second project, I have shown more in depth feedback and adjustments here: Project 1 - Point, Line, Plane, Project 2 - UDHR - Poster.

Key Adjustments from Feedback

Project 1

Project 1.jpg

I got feedback for my plane designs, to add tone to the first 2 designs.

I adjusted the design according to the feedback that i got and these were the designs after.

final designs - project 1.jpg

Project 2

Project 2.jpg

The middle design was the most effective, just got feedback to change alignment of text to be aligned with the 19.

I adjusted the design according to the feedback that i got and this was the design after.

After feedback.jpg