By https://substack.com/@yanagy

Revamp this offer in one sharp sentence, outcome-first language, perspective: reader.

Make the transformation obvious, clear and specific. Remove fluff. Make it convert. Follow this formula “Problem -> Solution -> Desired Outcome (without the usual frustration) + free gift (if relevant).” My current offer is: [add your offer/paid member benefits here]. Context: [Add information about you and your newsletter (who you are what you do, what problem you solve, how are you different, how is your solution unique), your audience (what are their problems, pains, frustrations, goals, desires, aspirations, and the actual offer (what it does and how - list the features here). Hint: If you have this on your about page, then paste the text from it.]

Avoid words in the call to action like “subscribe”, “get” or “learn”, write in action oriented language. Give me 5 different options. Ask me any questions you need to clarify first if you need to.”

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