Editing notes

• A-roll + hook variations here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1B-ntoPeAHP0svcUTptfY_NM4BEXzsZx7
• No B-roll needed, just the A-roll of her talking
• Use cuts and zooms to keep pace high and viewer engaged
• No music needed
• Normal TikTok captions
• Some of the words she says aren’t very clear so use the script below as guidance when checking the captions

Script

HOOK 1: Okay, so I swapped my wine for this tart lemon magnesium drink.

BODY: And honestly, no regrets. I used to think wine was the only way to unwind until I tried this.

It’s a magnesium drink that helps you relax without the sugar or the 3 a.m. wake up.

Tastes like tart lemon. No sugar. But what it really does, it chills you out without the hangover.

I sleep better, I feel better, and I don’t wake up like I’ve been hit by a bus.

They’re giving away free 5-night trials right now. No subscription required. Just try it and see if it beats your glass of wine.

HOOK 2:  This fucking lemon magnesium drink literally stopped me drinking wine every night [editing note: bleep ‘fucking’]

HOOK 3: Okay so ****I used to smoke the devil’s lettuce or drink wine every night after work, but recently swapped them both for this tart lemon magnesium drink.

HOOK 4: Girls, I used to think wine was the only way to unwind until I tried this. [editing note: script continues on to ‘It’s a magnesium drink…’]