基本步驟:

  1. Greetings + specific
    1. Dear _____
  2. Build a connection (1 - 2 sentences only)
    1. Happy new year and hoping you are enjoying your vacation thus far.
  3. Get straight to the point (Reason for the email)
    1. I am writing to you because ____.
    2. There has been a delay and we need to expand the timeline.
    3. I am writing to you for a quick update.
    4. I am wondering if it is possible to ask for a delay of deadline to _____
  4. Strong reinforcement (Extra information to show that you are working hard)
    1. Explanation process ( Focus on what’s in your control)
      1. Part 1: Reason for Delay
      2. Part 2: What I’ve done to fix this issue
      3. Part 3: What’s left to do
        1. What is left of the process is ____. So everything will be completed by ___.
  5. CTA (asking for feedback)
    1. Please let me know if you have any questions.
    2. I’d like to set up a call this week to answer any questions you might have.
    3. If you could get back to me ASAP with any questions, I’d appreciate it.

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Project Delay Sample Email

Dear Sherry,

I hope that you had a restful New Year’s vacation and are staying warm in Taipei.

I am writing you because there has been a slight delay in progress and we will need another 2 weeks to finish the project.

Unfortunately with many of the logistics delays caused by COVID, we do not have all the materials necessary to complete the project.  Despite initial delays, I have personally contacted all of our suppliers and double-checked with our own team on processing time.  I can assure you that we will be able to fill the order by the end of the month.

I apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused.  If you’re available for a concall this week I’d be happy to answer any questions you may have.

Nick

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Asking for discount Sample Email

Dear Nick,

I hope you are doing well.  I’ve heard there have been some ice storms in your area and hope your family is staying safe and warm.

I am writing to give an update on our latest discussions concerning your project proposal.  At this time we are interested but would like to know if there is any room for discussion on the pricing.