Thanks for sharing the Envelope Hollywoo Pitch Deck. I’ve reviewed it closely, and here’s my full feedback, broken into key sections:

🌟 Overall Impressions

This deck radiates personality and originality. It’s chaotic in a good way—wild, visceral, vivid—and stands apart from cookie-cutter Hollywood pitches. The visual language and the tone scream "this is different, and we know it." You’re walking the tightrope between sincerity and spectacle, and for the right audience, that’s gold.

But that same raw energy might be hard for more conservative execs to track without a Sherpa. It’s very Fitz-core, which is its magic—and also its risk. The more grounded you can make the benefits to the investor or partner, the better.

🔑 Strengths

1. Visual Identity & Vibe

• The aesthetic is gorgeous, scrappy, grassroots, and cinematic. It gives “Rat Park meets Meow Wolf meets Gummo but queer.”
• Slides like “The Premise” and “Rats in Recovery” are conceptually gripping and leave a strong impression.

2. Narrative Hook

• Framing this as part reality TV, part social experiment, part art installation is a brilliant move. It invites a broad audience while keeping the heart weird.
• Phrases like “a benevolent feedback loop” and “a feral field test of redemption” are sticky and poetic.

3. Authenticity

• Your lived experience isn’t just a credential—it’s the soul of this. That shows in the writing and structure.
• This isn’t exploitative trauma content; it’s mythic alchemy with real stakes.

🧱 Areas for Strengthening

1. Clarify the Call to Action

• What exactly are you asking from the reader at the end? Investment? Participation? Endorsement? Co-production? It’s gestured at, but a strong slide that says: “Here’s how you can be part of this” would make it actionable.