Mistake #1: Writing Essays Instead of Messages

The Problem: If it takes more than 20-30 seconds to read, it's too long.

⏱️ Real Example from a Top Performer:

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Jeremy from Elevate Clients (44% response rate) keeps his messages to one core principle: "If they can't read it in 10 seconds and decide 'I want to talk to this person' or 'I don't want to talk to this person,' that's my goal."

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The Fix:

• Limit first messages to 2-3 sentences maximum
• Use the "10-second rule" - if it takes longer to read, cut it down
• Focus on ONE clear point per message

https://youtu.be/23575l2W_oI

Mistake #2: Over-Personalizing Like a Stalker

The Problem: Mentioning their company name 5 times isn't personal; it's creepy.

🎖️ What Top Performers Do Instead:

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Philip from Peig (40% response rate) focuses on relevance over personalization: "I'm not going to mention that we went to the same college together or that we both like fishing. It's more about - this is my space, you work in the same space, mind if we connect?"

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The Fix:

• Use first name only for personalization
• Focus on industry relevance, not personal details
• Mention mutual connections if genuinely relevant

https://youtu.be/4geABi-xxCo

Mistake #3: Pitch-Slapping in Connection Requests

The Problem: Save the sales pitch for AFTER they accept.