Summary

Revised the local mockup for the personal-insurance delivery-driver page after the parallel audit found the first version fixed the obvious break but missed CTA, markup, related content, jargon, and design opportunities.

Live target reviewed in this lane: https://aguiarinjurylawyers.com/practice-areas/delivery-vehicle-accidents/personal-insurance-delivery-driver/

What changed

• Rebuilt from the WordPress REST raw content instead of the brittle public-rendered wrapper.
• Restored and expanded visual treatment for coverage lanes, app-status windows, Kentucky legal points, and next steps.
• Added a four-card comparison for Delivery Endorsement, Commercial Policy, UM/UIM Coverage, and PIP Benefits.
• Added a Related Content section with eight relevant delivery-cluster links and the standard heading Related Content, with no subheader.
• Rewrote jargon-heavy passages for ISO, endorsement, app status, UM/UIM, PIP, Window 2, and 50/100/25.
• Replaced generic bottom CTA with a page-specific denied-personal-coverage CTA.
• Removed body bold that was not a hyperlink.
• Rebuilt FAQ copy and matching FAQPage JSON-LD.

Artifact links

• Revised mockup: https://www.notion.so
• Publish-shaped content: https://www.notion.so
• Content quality gate: https://www.notion.so
• FAQ schema alignment: https://www.notion.so
• Render QA: https://www.notion.so
• Builder script: https://www.notion.so

QA results